Update page 'Qubes OS lokinet setup'

Qubes-OS-lokinet-setup.md

@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ Create new qube:
 * Name and label: **lokinet-vm**
 * Type: **Standalone qube copied from a template**
 * Template: **Debian-11**
-* Networking: **default (sys-firewall)** (if you want to cascade you can you a VPN)
+* Networking: **default (sys-firewall)** (or sys-whonix, or sys-vpm)
-
 
+Remark: Once you have lokinet access, you can also fetch packages over lokinet by changing `https://deb.oxen.io` to `http://deb.loki` (note "http" instead of "https").
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@@ -39,24 +39,16 @@ Create new qube:
 Create a new templateVM, name it **debian-11-lokinet**
 * Open a terminal in dom0
 * `[user@dom0~]$ qvm-clone debian-11 debian-11-lokinet`
-* Open the templateVM settings **[Dom0] Settings: debian-11-lokinet**
+* Open the templateVM settings *[Dom0] Settings: debian-11-lokinet*, confirm your setting with *Apply* and keep the window open.
-* Allow networking: Networking 
+* Allow networking: Networking: **sys-firewall** (or sys-whonix, or sys-vpm)
-
+> * sudo curl -so /etc/apt/trusted.gpg.d/oxen.gpg https://deb.oxen.io/pub.gpg (1)
-1. Allow networking in your debian-11-lokinet templateVM (Net qube: sys-firewall or sys-whonix in the template setting) , in order to add the oxen repository, it will print an error message, that's fine you know what you're doing
+* echo "deb https://deb.oxen.io $(lsb_release -sc) main" | sudo tee /etc/apt/sources.list.d/oxen.list
-
+* sudo apt update
-2. Following https://deb.oxen.io paste thoses commands to add the oxen repository
+* go back to your templateVM settings *[Dom0] Settings: debian-11-lokinet*, set the networking back to **default(none)** and confirm with *Apply* and close the setting window.
-
+* open a terminal in **debian-11-lokinet**
-    sudo curl -so /etc/apt/trusted.gpg.d/oxen.gpg https://deb.oxen.io/pub.gpg
+* `user@debian-11-lokinet:~$ sudo apt-get install lokinet -y`
-
-    echo "deb https://deb.oxen.io $(lsb_release -sc) main" | sudo tee /etc/apt/sources.list.d/oxen.list
-
-    sudo apt update
-
-(You can remove the network authorisation on your debian-11-lokinet templateVM from here)
-
-3. Install the lokinet package :
-    sudo apt-get install lokinet -y
 
+Remark: Once you have lokinet access, you can also fetch packages over lokinet by changing `https://deb.oxen.io` to `http://deb.loki` (note "http" instead of "https").
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@@ -120,7 +112,7 @@ ________________________________________________________
 ________________________________________________________
 
 
-sources: Oxen Privacy Tech Foundation (OPTF) https://optf.ngo/about-optf.
+sources: https://deb.oxen.io/; Oxen Privacy Tech Foundation (OPTF) https://optf.ngo/about-optf.
 
 contributors: Loutchi